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bmking
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Posted: 2008-Mar-07 09:52
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Name of Site/Business: BM Entertainment

Site's Main Purpose: Ecommerce/Sales

Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?

Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?

Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?

Appearance/Attractiveness

Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?



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The mission statement of this business is to make a Entertainment business far better than any other, to bring about a powerful web systematical site in Entertainment around the world, any kind of entertainment, from creative writing to web design to music, every thing entertainment, advertising and to movies.

BM Entertainment wants to bring about the web entertainment site of the future, where you can have every thing entertainment, clothing, goods; news can be accessed on this website.

BM Entertainment is working on a user generated site, where you can upload, download, have a profile, and a entertainment network site that will work for everyone that wants entertainment.




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Posted: 2008-Apr-06 19:35
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Blue text on Black background is EXTREMELY hard to read. A brief mission statement on the index page, such as you've written above, would let people know why they are there in the first place.


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